Rhyming words

I was going through my school magazines, its fun reading stuffs which we wrote those days and came across a poem written by me.
When I was in school, I was very much fascinated by these rhyming words, probably because the English poems rhymed….and felt inspiring.
I tried writing poems with rhyming words….
Have a look at the poem published in my school magazine:
Success
Success comes to those, who try for it,
It doesn’t come to those who pray for it.
Success comes to those, who go with the time,
It comes to those who try hard to shine,
Success doesn’t come to those who are lazy,
It doesn’t come to those who are money crazy.
It only comes to those who have a heart of winning spirit.

This inspires me to write some rhyming poems now…..but stuffs you write in your earlier age is not criticized much, as it would be criticized now…..